Deck Design

[limpbiz2789]

Hey guys. This is my third design. I tossed the other two because it wasn't me. I kept posting and changing it due to other peoples likings. This right here is the finished design for this one. Hope you enjoy.

Here's a link to show you what it would look like as an actual card

http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/5158/carddesign3.jpg

also heres a detailed picture of design because when you click on the picture through theory11 it doesnt come out as good.

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1815/detailedi.jpg


Please comment. Thank you.
-Sean

 

[cedwards90]

Doesnt really appeal to me, maybe its the lack of color..

 

[magicman1040]

It's great that you created this is shows your creative side, but it doesn't really appeal to me. Maybe it's a little boring.

 

[limpbiz2789]

People please comment more!
Thanks

-sean

 

[cm763]

The top, bottom, right, and left are too...bare. There's nothing happening there.

As well, the scythes are too black. Like, it's a big flat colour (technically a "shade", heh), and it really stands about because of it. It really distracts from the rest of the design. Maybe add a design in the scythes, so there's less ink? And the pole part of the scythes are too black, as well, but I'm at a loss for how to remedy it.

Hope that helps!