Pandemonium

[Camel]

Hey guys, I have been working on this cut (Pandemonium) for a while now and I would like to see what you guys think. The ending still needs to be tweaked a bit and I do need to make it smoother, but please tell me what you think of it.

Here it is: http://vimeo.com/3060050

The firs phase of the cut is based off of Pandora by Dan and Dave

 

[jazzhands1]

ah, very nice. I like the corner spins a lot.

for the ending, I think instead of the armspread, you could do a display. Like a fan sybil or something.

 

[louis]

very nice
i love it
it's ok if i steal some ideas ? :]

 

[FOO:L]

against the grain here, but i didnt like it at all. sloppy, the armspread catch was a fail and the handling was very very messy. work on smoothness.

 

[GusEds]

Its an idea.

But I feel It has so many different - non conjoining parts, that It would be hard to make it smooth.

It's Daren Yeow, by the way

Gustav

 

[Camel]

I know that Daren Yeow made Mockingbird, which was another inspiration for the cut. And I also know that I need to make it smoother and make a better ending for it. This is still in the workings and I am still coming up with endings for it.

 

[dragon521]

At about 24 seconds it went down hill. Up until then it was alright.

 

[GusEds]

I know that Daren Yeow made Mockingbird, which was another inspiration for the cut. And I also know that I need to make it smoother and make a better ending for it. This is still in the workings and I am still coming up with endings for it.

Nothing that practise cant resolve

What I meant was, you spelt 'Daren Yao' on the vimeo page, instead of Daren Yeow.

Gustav

 

[Camel]

Oh yeah, I noticed that and forgot to change it.

 

[ROYm]

well you know yourself you have to practice bit more and it will be perfect - im sure you know it yourself so its meaningless to say it again.
if i understand right you want us to tell you what we think of your cut in overall. well - i think its great. combining moves from mockingbird, molecule 4, and pandora and of course a touch of your own - its a creative combination that fits together . it looks great and it will look way better when perfecting it.


roy.