The Twister was horrible.
Dude, get some effin practice. That was garbage. Sorry to say, but it's true. You even dropped cards and couldn't handle them in a clean fashion. Daamn I hate performances like that.
And HMH, while I liked your more, I won't say it was that much better. I know I lost to pretty much the same performance (Probably taken at the same day?), but I don't like it.
Do not open with Stigmata. It's way too powerfull. And the more predecessors you perform before it, the bigger reactions it will score. Think of it like Warming up the audience.
Don't do the number 7. Its just two lines, so do eight or something. It's much more visible and it's shape more impossible. Trust me on this.
However, drop version one altogether. The second version (With the name) is sooo much more personal. You get them to provoke their feelings and memories. You will get a different reactions altogether.
Also, change the patter a bit, dropping "the blood takes shape of it" so it's more of a surprise factor.
-Seb