Well, to break it to you, it wasn't creepy nor scary or entertaining. I can only say that in the best way I can. The plot line looks like it was thrown together in 10 minutes and the environment didn't make it creepy. To make a creepy video, you HAVE to have the proper environment, otherwise, it doesn't fit and it just looks weird. I'm participating in the Dan and Dave Halloween Contest at the moment and have learned a lot about making things look eerie and creepy. You might want to check that out on their website under the news section. Research scary elements, watch scary movies, study them, and learn from it. The video I am working on now contains elements that I have researched and studied; it takes effort to produce a quality horror/scary video.
When you put in a lot of effort, you get a lot of return. This rule applies to everything, such as practicing your tricks, flourishes, or everyday activities. The same rules apply, you just have to put in the time. Hope this helps.
-Casey