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The words and music were pretty good all things considered. The single letter spelling through Super Natural is a bit of an eye sore.
I would change that sequence out for a dictionary deffenition of the word "supernatural"
Be like. Scene shot 1: [word supernatural apperas. Then the pronounceation flashes into view ala ghost like.] (Soop-er-nat-ural)
Scene shot 2: [words appear. Fade in.] Verb.
Scene Shot 3: [words scroll across screen until all is present] Something out of the ordenary. ....blah blah. etc.
The words and music were pretty good all things considered. The single letter spelling through Super Natural is a bit of an eye sore.
I would change that sequence out for a dictionary deffenition of the word "supernatural"
Be like. Scene shot 1: [word supernatural apperas. Then the pronounceation flashes into view ala ghost like.] (Soop-er-nat-ural)
Scene shot 2: [words appear. Fade in.] Verb.
Scene Shot 3: [words scroll across screen until all is present] Something out of the ordenary. ....blah blah. etc.
Or have each letter flash up like that but keep the letters before it on screen until the word is spelled out.
Or do something else comletely diffrent.
Lastly: What is up with that blanket thing at the end? If you are going to use live video or images in your promo, then they either have to tell a story or convey a message. Not just appear at the end and leave the audience wondering what just happend.
There are two ways you can approach this.
1) Insert more video of you doing magic else where and or use only 1 video sequance (of that blanket vanish per say) but show it completely through start to finish. Use this to establish the fact that this serries is about magic. Assume someone who is watching the video will be doing so for the first time and will have NO clue who you are or what you are about.
2) Keep the words and graphics and music. Just change the final video sequence. Make it a shot of you on a street corner at midnight with a full moon in the back ground. You are holding a single glowing torch which turns instantly into a red rose. (Torch to Rose) Or Flash Paper to Rose Production, or flash paper period. Something. Anything that shows a quick flash of skill and your face. This establishes YOU as being "supernatural" and brings the images full circle into a final statement. That statement being: "Watch me. I'm amazing."
I dont know what you said seeing how it was edited out but i saw your videos and they are crap. You have been on youtube for almost a year and no one knows who you are.Why would I want to imitate criss angel. He would be the last person I want to imitate, I have my own persona.
I run across people like you all the time and each time its always some 12 year old kid trying to say that his videos are better than mine. Well I have news for you......they aren't
I dont know what you said seeing how it was edited out but i saw your videos and they are crap. You have been on youtube for almost a year and no one knows who you are.Why would I want to imitate criss angel. He would be the last person I want to imitate, I have my own persona.
I run across people like you all the time and each time its always some 12 year old kid trying to say that his videos are better than mine. Well I have news for you......they aren't
Why would I want to imitate criss angel. He would be the last person I want to imitate, I have my own persona.
This makes me chuckle. Criss Angel had a special on A&E, who also produced the DVD, by the name of Supernatural. This special uses music that was written for it, in fact... it's the same music you are using for your "season promo". Now, I know that imitation is flattery and people can learn by imitating. That's fine and is recognized by many as a step to developing your own style. See The Magic of Ascanio book one where he and Juan Tamariz have a conversation about this very matter. But, you can't take the man's music and creative idea's and then deny the fact that you are indeed imitating. Not only is it disrespectful, but it makes you look like a unappreciative jerk trying to save face in front of a group who you feel will probably rip on you for admitting that you are or at least were inspired by Criss.
Peace, John