Firstly, mucho respecto for going out there and just doing it, good work. Anything I say here is simply to help, please understand that.
First, 2 Card Monte. I noticed there was no "routine" to it, you just started "switching" cards. You don't need some big patter fest, but some sort of patter would really fill out the effect and make it stronger, in my opinion. Something like talking about gamblers or con men, ect. There are tons of presentations for it, those two are jut the classics.
Then, your sleight of hand. There is nothing technically wrong about your double, I suppose, but I cringed when I saw it. It was SO exaggerated and it seemed like you had to use both hands just to turn over a "single" card. This was especially noticeable when you would turn over a legit single in a very normal, carefree manner, and then struggle with turning over the double. It makes your performance choppy and unprofessional. Work on your double and using as little effort as possible. Your top change also needs a good bit of work. Instead of using any misdirection you tried to use speed which made for a very awkward, noisy top change. Work on getting it silent and then work the misdirection for it into your routine. Take a step back, relax, then change, ect.
Also, you need to respect your spectators and their personal space more. With your 2 card monte you were jabbing cards at their hands for no apparently pattered reason, and with just this quick, intruding force. Be smooth with them, shake their hand, slowly break the space barrier and then even when you do, let it be in a gentle, respectful way.
Distortion, really, you just need to work on the sleight of hand and perhaps patter a touch more. The sleights were just plain slow and awkward, especially when it took 5 seconds to get your break. Watch the dvd and perfect the sleights. Also, transpositions do not need much patter, but even just stating what is happening is a great addition. Watching that performance I didn't understand what was going on or about to happen until it was all over.
The glide effect was very cool (don't you just love it when they touch the right card?) but the sleight itself could have bit just a bit smoother, but it was nothing that bad.
Overall, those are the big points I have. Again, props for going and taking your licks out there in the world.
C=B