First Video

[AdamF]

It's pouring rain outside so I thought it was the perfect opportunity to make my first (very short)cardistry video. I've been practicing for about 5 months now so please bear with me. Comments and Critique would be appreciated. Thanks. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wUZmn0EmR0g
Credits:
Dan and Dave Buck
Daniel Madison
Andrei Jikh
Jeff Mcbride

 

[Sepharoth]

That's pretty neat I'm no expert in this field, but it looked impressive and I guess that's what counts in cardistry.

One thing I would say though, is that when you watch people like Andrei Jikh etc do flourishes, their arms and hands are always waving around in a (seemingly) controlled manner, which makes it look like a lot more is going on. Maybe trying something like that with a few of the moves would be great?

 

[GuSSeee]

What was the fluorish at about :20?

 

[AdamF]

Thanks for the comments! And Sepharoth, I agree. I will definitely try to add more flare to the moves.
And the flourish at :20 is Akira by Dan and Dave Buck. It can be found on disc 2 of the trilogy or as a download right here at theory11.