Hi! my other battle began 
So same, any feedback is greatly appreciated
http://media.theory11.com/battles/battle.php?id=1348
So same, any feedback is greatly appreciated
http://media.theory11.com/battles/battle.php?id=1348
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Flourishy Flourish
- Thread starter Justice
- Start date
Great battle you guys.
Vanish - like Nino said you need to work on smoothness. I like the originality, but I think you should maybe change it up a bit so it can flow better. You have something good, just keep working on it!
Justice - nice video, nice flourish. You have my vote.
Vanish - like Nino said you need to work on smoothness. I like the originality, but I think you should maybe change it up a bit so it can flow better. You have something good, just keep working on it!
Justice - nice video, nice flourish. You have my vote.
Justice you got my vote. Vanish's video was good but it was kind of choppy in some areas, like the slow placing of the deck on the back of the hand and a couple others. Both very good, but like I said my vote goes to justice.
Vanish, let's be honest, you weren't quite ready for a battle just yet. Your moves need to be much smoother, and I noticed that, whenever you caught a packet that you had thrown in the air, you would kind of bend down a little, so as to go with the movement of the packet (kind of hard to explain, do you know what I'm talking about?) an example of this is at 0:17 seconds in your vid, and you do it throughout the entire video. Please work on that. Just keep practicing!
Justice, your vid was great, I freaking LOVE your mask, and your flourishes were great as well. Keep practicing. (always good advise)
I voted for Justice...as soon as I heard Theory11 music. I like Dana's music, but it is so overused, that I am getting sick of it. There's other music out there people!!!
Great job both of you, keep up the practice!
Justice, your vid was great, I freaking LOVE your mask, and your flourishes were great as well. Keep practicing. (always good advise)
I voted for Justice...as soon as I heard Theory11 music. I like Dana's music, but it is so overused, that I am getting sick of it. There's other music out there people!!!
Great job both of you, keep up the practice!
Thanks for the advice guys. This was a new flourish I have been working on (I am pretty sure I made it up) and I wanted to test it out. Thanks again for the feedback.
btw, Justice's mask is awesome! XD
btw, Justice's mask is awesome! XD
Thanks for the comments and critics so far, there is one day for voting left and any tips or critic (or vote) is welcome.
Thans a lot
Thans a lot
Really, this kind of battle is a breath of fresh air to the battle section.
Good work Justice you got my vote.
Good work Justice you got my vote
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