My First Original Cut

[stovermagic]

Hey guys. I don't want to spam, but I just want some feedback on the first cut I've created. It's called the Gen. E cut (Named after a girl named Jenny ) and I would appreciate if you would take a quick look and tell me what you think. It's not overly complicated, but just a stylish little move. Thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wv8zerkLZy4

PS It's my birthday today

 

[Nicholas S]

Sorry to disappoint you but your cut is a variation of and ending sequence to "Sybil" that Brian Tudor does. He performs it in both his Heckler and Showoff 2 videos (been around since early 2000). The only thing different is you throw the packet. I've also seen one of the Buck twins do it several years ago when performing their "False Sybil."

At any rate, happy birthday.

 

[Nicholas S]

Scratch that - I meant Showoff 1, not 2. In that case, it's been around since 1999.

 

[S.G]

Well, first of all, let me start by saying Happy Birthday!

And yes, this is a variation but not only that but it is also rather messy. I think that if you extended on this idea and then smoothened it out, you could have a decent cut.

Good luck!

 

[stovermagic]

Ah I see. Thanks for the comments. I haven't seen any of those videos, so it's purely coincidence. I'll check it out and see if I do it the same way.