Not too shabby. Your palms still look a little awkward though. A quick fix would be to not curl your index finder on the table. It works great when holding a deck, but it just looks weird on the table. Also pushing your pinky in so it is slightly underneath the ring finger will help make your hand look more natural. Don't be afraid to bend the card either. Putting your knuckles down on the table looks very convincing.
Finally there is a little too much movement on your OHTP. Vanishing INC has a great on demand for it where there is almost no movement. I suggest you check it out.
All in all good job.
Cheers
Oni