in the close up video:
-The double turnovers you did, need to be improved upon. I recommend getting the 1 on 1 on double lifts by Jason England, and then practice!
-When you did 2 card monte, you had no reason to put your hands together to do the sleight. Try and make an excuse for the meet of the two hands. There are loads of ways. DAMN it i want to say the sleight but i do not want to expose the method.
-Also when you got the cards ready or 2 card monte. It looked like you were arranging the cards and can make you look suspicious. I recommend looking into this method >>>>>
http://forums.theory11.com/showthread.php?t=18800 <<<<<<<<<<<<<
Thats pretty much it, very nice performances/
In the card through window video:
-Rather than snatching the card from the spectator ask him, are you done shuffling? or something along those lines
-Look through the deck to try and find the card and then say something like I cannot find it.....then throw the deck in anger and walk away. Then the spectator would most of the time look at the window and freak out because their card is on the other side. This is just my way of doing it.
-When you take the card back do a Diagonal palm **** and then give the deck for shuffling, then ditch the card. This is just more fool proof.
Very nice video again, just keep those things in mind. Also try working on a script for each trick you, so you can be more original.
(nice Classic Forces)