Sorry, I made a second topic about this.
I'll jsut throw on what I had to say here...
I liked it and all, but I saw lots of opportunities for one-liners and such. I used to try to script my close-up effects, but this video is exactly the reason I stopped that. It seemed as if you were afraid of deviating from your script and interacting with the audience more than required. My effects that I perform in school usually take waay too long because I joke around with the class a lot. Today in 3rd Hour I performed one of the simplest and easiest to figure out tricks that I know (a simple One-Ahead Principle thing), and still got great reactions.
I don't know about you, but the Asian kid was annoying the he11 out of me, and I think you should have taken care of him. He practically taking over your performances at some points, and would not shut up. I think it's great that he was having a good time, but I think something should have been done about him.
Again, I did like it, but I would have liked to see a more personal and interesting performance.
