If I had to sum it up in a single word, I'd say you were something of a huckster. From the description of your presentation, I would assume it's done very tongue-in-cheek and with a bit of the air of a wily con man. If not, I suggest you experiment a bit with it as you seem to emphasize skill and deception over mystery. And with the element of mystery being down-played, you need to bolster the performance with an entertaining persona.
That in mind, I would advise you to look into the history of con artistry and study gambling cheats. Look into Sal Piacente's work and find some biographies of The Yellow Kid and Count Victor Lustig.
I like your word choice
huckster (never heard that one before)- One who uses aggressive, showy, and sometimes devious methods to promote or sell a product.
Kinda sounds like me. For example, recently my club at school was trying to sell raffle tickets to raise money for charity and I decided to try doing the 3 Card Monte to get a crowd around our table. NOTE: We were not taking money for the 3 Card Monte, it was just away to get attention.
Tongue-in-cheek- Meant or expressed ironically or facetiously.
I think this is a good way to describe it. Like I'm just messing around, BUT I still respect the magic moment. (Just like Darwin Ortiz recommends) And I definitely appreciate the word choice. Because saying something like "sarcastic" I think would not have been accurate. Because in sarcasm, usually you usually have a sense of superiority over the audience, and I also am bad at being sarcastic. I either overdo it and sound like a jerk or under do it and they don't realize it is sarcasm.
Wily conmen- makes me think of Pop Haydn, Whit Haydn's character.
I love the Pop Haydn character. Whit says that he doesn't do any cons except for the shell game occasionally. So as a conman, I know I don't have to have every trick as a con. I don't do any cons except for the 3 Card Monte and a Coin under Watch or Card to Spec's Pocket w/ a tiny pickpocketing theme. BUT when I do the card to spec's pocket I show them how a pickpocket would do it by bumping into them. Then I do it under "test conditions" where I have them hold my wrists and I make their card vanish overhere and then appear in their pocket.
Skill and deception over mystery
I don't think that I show skill and deception over mystery. The off hand flourishes are extremely downplayed. Or did you mean hidden skill. Like sleight of hand? If skill was over mystery, then I think I would be the kinda person that is always challenging his spectator's. I know my sleight of hand is NOT strong enough to take serious examination. Like if they were constantly burning me and I had no misdirection or presentation, I would definitely get caught. If that is NOT what you mean by skill over mystery please explain.
There are also certain tricks that I do where I try to hand the power over to the spectator (Jay Sankey) For example after a gag where I fail to read a spec's mind I do a multiple card selection routine. Then I take the deck and give it to the spectator and have them shuffle it. And then go into Sankey's mind over matter invisible deck routine. I really like this routine because it is all about the specs and they do everything (shuffle the cards, turn one over, and then the rest of the audience generates their card) The only thing I do is spread the cards. With a trick like that, you don't want to have skill over mystery.
So like I said before, I try to milk the suspense and build up the mystery. I don't try to cheapen it with the comedy. It's supposed to be like Laugh, laugh. Amazing. Instead of wait, wait, wait. Amazing. (Gerry Mccambridge) The job of the comedy is to make the normally boring parts (picking the cards or shuffling) entertaining instead.
Thanks for the advice. Just like Morgician said, I want them to remember me more than my tricks and a stronger persona would do that.
Studying other conmen would help me by giving me some esoteric knowledge and by helping me develop my character. And I find them really interesting. I love the little stories used in David Blaine's book and I loved Ocean's 11 and the Italian Job. I've heard about Matchstick Men. Anyone know if it's any good? Any other suggestions?
I saw a thread where it was like what do you say when someone asks you "How did you do that?" I say cuz "I"M A NINJA NIN NINJA!" (nighiga!) Some people might say I'm insulting their intelligence by giving them a BS answer, but keep in mind my character. I don't take myself seriously and try to be very easy going. I want them all going away at the end feeling like we're best friends having connected on a personal level.
And I personally think that a morally challenged modern-day ninja would be extremely talented at hustling people.
Thank you for your advice.
This has been a very good exercise in learning about myself.
Any more?